http://www.globenewswire.com/newsroom/news.html?d=232401
This news release was almost asking to be skipped over by most readers. The first sentence was composed of more than 60 words! That is about 40 words over the acceptable number. The sentence was so long that I had to read it a few times over in order to understand the content. Rather than the company's name sticking in my mind it was wondering when the sentence was going to end. This should be something to avoid when trying to pull in readers and keep them reading.
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